
I never know what emotion I am going to feel when getting a critique back--excited, anxious, frustrated, all of the above?
For me, getting a critique of my WIP returned is the most difficult part of writing. And it isn't about what the critiquer says--it is about getting back into the rhythm of the text and trying to implement the changes. In order to struggle though this, I've made myself a specific agenda that I follow for critique revisions.
Step One: Read though all the suggestions. Then close the document and walk away. I wait at least a week before making any changes. I'm thinking about it that entire time--my brain is organizing and evaluating, but I don't make any changes yet.
Step Two: Get back into the text. I work on a second WIP while the first is out on revision vacation, so there is always a break, which helps me get perspective, but also creates some distance for me with the critiqued WIP. I get back into it by reading my favorite section. For my current WIP, that happens to be the last four pages. But it not always the end--for Gone it is this one kissing scene Mmmm...kissing scene.
Step Three: Make all the little changes first (awkward/confusing sentences, deleting extra words, etc). I do this for a few reasons. First, it gives me a sense of accomplishment. Second, some of these changes are hard to find after the larger changes are completed. And even if the sentence in question doesn't make it into the final draft, I still learn by making the changes. I understand sentence structure and diction and syntax better with every single change. I don't want to forgo that learning just because a section is deleted.
Step Four: Make a list of all the larger changes suggested and classify them: changes to make, changes to consider, suggestions to shelve (for now). For the changes to consider, I decide not to change the text now but pay special attention to what a second critique partner says. Suggestions to be shelved are those tidbits of advice that I don't think fit in my overall concept of the text. But, but, but--I keep this list so that if other critique partners make the same suggestions, I re-evaluate.
Step Five: Plan out the larger changes I intend to make. I make a change outline that addresses specifically how I plan to alter the text. I do this because I want to be sure of the changes. Why? Because I don't save previous versions of my novels. I do this intentionally. There is no going back, which means I take the changes very seriously. If I delete a scene or chapter, then it is gone for good. Something about it wasn't working anyway, so if I need a section back, I re-write it.
Step Six: Print out and re-read after all the new, shinny changes. Smile at completing a rewrite/revision and send it out again!
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I can't wait to get to the "smiling at shiny new changes" stage. Almost there with the new opening, but not quite. And I'm kind of starting to hate that phrase!
Good plan. I just got a chapter crit back from a buddy - and I do like to let it sit for a few days before I attack :)
Sounds like good, sound advice. I'm not there yet, but I will definitely approach it your way. Thanks!
This list of steps is very helpful. So far, I've only shared a few pages at a time so changes are easier. But when I reach the terrifying stage when I send the entire thing out for feedback, I think your steps are great. It is hard to get back into the text, and re-reading the whole thing is very time-consuming. Just reading a favorite scene is a perfect way to get back into the voice. Thanks :).
This is a VERY helpful post. I love your process and seriously want to give it a try.
Great tips, thanks for sharing.
What a great idea to do it by steps. I usually plunge right in and have moments of great frustration.
I've found I do some of the suggestions and leave it at that. I fear, with rookie anxiety, that if I read/change/read/change past revisions, I'll stall my progress and end up with something completely different if I change everything early on.
If I get something different at the end, that's okay, but I won't know it's different if I don't get to the end at least once.
I like your method! I love to see how everyone works! Before I send my work to my crit partners I revise it twice... the first is a quick read through, the second is line editing.
Then I send it off. They do half the novel, showing me my weakenesses (run-ons, repeating things, rewording). Then I use what I learned and revise the second half and send it back.
From there they'll do a final over edit to see if I learned. It makes you teach yourself how to do it rather than relying on others.
It's a genius plan and it makes me excited to get my work rather than overly terrified!!!
I liked to read what you do through the process. I just got my first rough draft done. Soon I will begin editing and it is helpful to see how others do it.
Do you do a complete read-through first before focusing on chapters? Please email me...I'd like to talk more about this.
Thank you!
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